I'll start with the story that started the story.
Today for English, Pn. Kam initially wanted us to do something in the Topical Assessment book. But, Jane couldn't find the stack of books. (why? I also don't know)
So, teacher told us to make up story instead. She picked out this picture composition about an incident. Some robbery. Imagine ourselves as being someone who witnessed it.
Everyone in the class had to contribute at least one sentence.
And here goes the story (that was started with the story above), starting from the first person on the left of the class: please excuse me if I made you a bit confused there. ;)
Aida: One day, when I was at the electrical shop, I saw a suspicious looking man roaming around.
Kanimoly: As he was roaming around, he tried to steal an electrical appliance from that shop.
Adrina: I was curious about what he was up to, so I followed him.
Alini: Suddenly, as I followed him, I finally realise that he went into the guys' toilet.
Elaine: I stared at the toilet's door and waited for hours. :)
Ati: I do not know why I had the feeling to wait for that guy to come out from the toilet door. Suddenly, I saw the same guy with different clothes.
Sonia: He walked back to the place and he was eyeing a very nice iPod touch.
Nadiah: Then, he tried to stole that iPod and put it in his pocket.
Dian: I became terrified. So, I hurried to the counter and told the salesperson.
Divya: The salesperson was furios. He called the security and told them to catch the guy.
Crystal: The security approached the guy.
Simone: Then, the guy looked at the security and laughed.
Afiqah: (laughs) =D
San Pei: The security asked the guy whether he has stolen the iPod.
Raveenaa: The guy said, "I did not stole his iPod, instead I stole his radio."
Mei Xin: Then guard said, "How dare you steal my stuff!"
Jane: And he called the police.
Intan: The guy panicked and tried to make a run for it. Along the way, he slammed into one of the aisles and fell. All the contents of his pockets fell out.
Jannah: He knew he could not take the iPod back because they are approaching him. He quickly grabbed a banana that he dropped and run.
Kit May: He peeled the banana (PEEL BANANA, PEEL PEEL BANANA), and threw the banana skin to where the security are coming...
Foong: After that, he ate the banana while running. (Mm..so delicious!)
Wenn Yue: The security guard ran after the thief. When he was running, he accidentally stepped on the banana peel and fall flat onto the ground.
Mellissa: The security guard regained his balance fast enough. A cat and mouse chase ensued between the guard and the boy as curious shoppers stared in awe.
Nadhra: Someone screamed.
Fiona: He trampled over a little girl.
Jasmin: The little girl started crying. He felt guilty, so he started crying with the little girl.
Farhanah: Then he wet his pants. XD
Eldina: Suddenly, he stop crying and ran away because he saw the security guard was running after him. At last, he stopped and turned and said, "Please let me have the radio, I wanted that radio so badly!" The the security guard said, "No, you can't have it. Unless you pay for it." The boy cried and the security guard called the police.
Emily: The cops came in time, but too bad, they were too fat to catch the thief...
The End.
3P seems to be budding a bunch of future writers, don't you think?
Love, Intan.
Note: I only modified a few words here and there so that it made more sense. I did not change any mistakes in grammar. (SURPRISINGLY HARD TO DO!!)
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